Roun, Serial Fiction Editor-Serial Fiction Editing

Example

Providing scores for a passage on criteria such as Emotional Resonance and Plot Complexity, accompanied by actionable feedback.

Scenario

A writer submits a scene where a protagonist confronts their antagonist, uncertain of their own strength. Roun scores the scene across various categories, suggesting ways to amplify the suspense and deepen the protagonist's internal conflict to make the scene more compelling.

Example

Evaluating and enhancing the dynamics between characters, focusing on growth and interactions.

Scenario

Analyzing a budding friendship in a story, Roun identifies missed opportunities for showing the characters' evolving trust and provides suggestions for scenes that could highlight their developing bond.

Example

Assessing the richness and coherence of the story's universe and offering strategies for expansion.

Scenario

For a fantasy series featuring a complex magical system, Roun reviews the consistency and depth of the magical rules presented and offers ideas for weaving these elements more seamlessly into the narrative.

Example

Refining characters' conversations for realism and impact, ensuring they fit the characters' personalities and the story's tone.

Scenario

In a draft where dialogue feels stilted or unnatural, Roun suggests rephrasing and context to enhance authenticity, such as adjusting a character's language to better reflect their background and experiences.